Cold message for a job: how to get a reply

Most cold messages for a job die for the same reason: they ask a stranger to do work. 'Are there any openings?' asks the reader to check, think, commit and reply, for someone they have never met. A cold message for a job gets a reply when it asks for something the reader can give in two minutes, and that thing is advice, not a job. This guide is that one rule applied: what to ask, the four sentences that carry it, where replies come faster, which teams to aim at, and what to do when the answer arrives. Templates included.
Why 'are there any openings?' gets no answer
People ignore requests for jobs and answer requests for advice. Not because they are selfish; because advice is theirs to give and jobs are not. A hiring manager cannot promise you a role in a direct message, so the honest answers to 'do you have openings?' are 'no' or silence. But 'how did you get started in this field?' or 'what would you look for in a junior joining your team?' they can answer in two minutes, and most people quietly enjoy being asked. The reader has to be able to say yes without checking with anyone. That is the whole test. Run every sentence you write through it.
The four sentences
Who you are, in one line. Why them specifically: something true about their work, their team or their path that you actually looked up. One concrete, answerable question. And a graceful exit that expects nothing. No CV attached, no 'I would love to hop on a call', no life story. Here is the shape with the blanks filled in: 'Hi Ana, I am a final-year economics student in Lisbon, starting my search for a first analyst role. I read your post about moving from audit into fintech and it matched what I am weighing up now. If you had to pick one thing a junior should be able to do on day one on your team, what would it be? No worries at all if you do not have time.' Seventy-one words. Change the three true details and it is yours.
| Sentence | What it does | Example |
|---|---|---|
| 1. Who you are | Tells them how to read the rest | Final-year economics student in Lisbon, looking for a first analyst role |
| 2. Why them | Proves this is not a template | I read your post about moving from audit into fintech |
| 3. One question | Gives them something they can answer in two minutes | What should a junior be able to do on day one on your team? |
| 4. Graceful exit | Removes the guilt of not replying, which makes replying easier | No worries at all if you do not have time |
Under 80 words, and one question only
The whole message should take fifteen seconds to read and two minutes to answer. In practice that means under 80 words; if it needs scrolling on a phone, cut it. One question, not three, because three questions is a questionnaire and a questionnaire is work. And match the question to the person. A recruiter can tell you how the process runs and what the team is short of. A hiring manager can tell you what the role really involves and what they look for in a junior, but not review your CV or skip the process, so do not ask. An alumnus can tell you how they got in. Someone your own age on the team can tell you what the first month was like. Ask each of them the thing only they can answer.
| Person | Ask this | Not this |
|---|---|---|
| Recruiter | How the process runs; what the team is short of | Do you have openings? |
| Hiring manager | What the role really involves; what they look for in a junior | Can you review my CV? Can I skip the first round? |
| Alumnus from your university | How they got in; what they would do differently | Can you refer me? |
| Someone your age on the team | What the first month was like; what surprised them | Can you put in a word for me? |
Where replies come faster
LinkedIn is the default, and everyone on it is being hunted. Replies come faster where people are less so: alumni networks from your university, community Slacks and Discords for your field, meetup groups, even a short thoughtful email. Alumni are the single best channel for juniors. 'We went to the same school' is a real connection, and most people remember being new. Whatever the channel, pair the message with a fresh listing. 'I saw your team is hiring a junior analyst this week' is specific by definition, and it tells the reader you did the reading. If you will need a visa, that is a fair question too: 'has your team hired a junior from outside the EU before?' is answerable, and our visa sponsorship guide for graduates tells you which markets to ask it in.
Aim at teams hiring juniors now
A perfect message to a team with no junior opening is still a message to a closed door. So start from the listings, not from the people. Of the 29,410 listings we track as of 17 September 2026, 5,643 are junior-friendly, and 680 of those have the ad written in English. By country the English-language junior pool is Germany with 128, France with 83, the United Kingdom with 72, the Netherlands with 59, Spain with 49, Italy with 42 and Sweden with 38; Portugal, Denmark, Ireland and Switzerland follow with 19 or fewer each. Pick a listing, find one person on that team or the recruiter named in the ad, and write the four sentences about that role. The entry-level jobs in Germany in English guide covers the biggest of these pools; engineering listings are where the English-language share is highest.
| Country | Junior-friendly listings in English |
|---|---|
| Germany | 128 |
| France | 83 |
| United Kingdom | 72 |
| Netherlands | 59 |
| Spain | 49 |
| Italy | 42 |
| Sweden | 38 |
| Portugal | 19 |
| Denmark | 17 |
| Ireland | 12 |
| Switzerland | 10 |
Five a week, one follow-up, then move on
Five researched messages a week beat fifty templates, because the second sentence, why them, cannot be templated and is the sentence that gets read. Expect roughly one in three to reply; alumni reply more often than strangers. Silence is normal and means nothing about you. Wait a week, send one short follow-up, two lines at most, and then move on. The next message costs two minutes. Keep a list: who, when, what you asked, whether they answered. After a month you will have twenty conversations started and six or seven running, which is more than most applicants have after a hundred applications.
What happens when they reply
Do not pounce with 'so can you refer me?'. Answer well, thank them for the specific thing they said, and let the conversation breathe. Referrals, tips about unadvertised openings and 'send me your CV' offers appear on their own once a real exchange exists, usually within a message or two. When the CV request comes, send one that gets past the filters, one page, in the ad's own words. And when you eventually apply somewhere they work, you are no longer a stranger in the pile. You are the person who asked a good question last month, and the interview starts warm.
What nobody mentions
First, the advice you get is real and worth having, not a pretext. People who ask well and listen end up applying for better-fitting roles, which is a bigger edge than any referral. Second, the follow-up is where most people blow it: a second message that says 'just bumping this' asks for work again. A follow-up that adds one line, 'I applied for the junior role on your team on Tuesday, in case it is useful to know', gives instead of asks. Third, never message ten people at the same company in the same week. They talk. One person per team, and the recruiter named in the ad, is plenty.
One rule, then: ask for the thing they can give in two minutes. Four sentences, under 80 words, one question, five a week, aimed at a team with a junior opening this week. Workcamino tells you which companies are hiring juniors right now, so every message is aimed at a real, open door. Browse the junior-friendly listings with the ad in English. Buen camino.
Frequently asked questions
What should I write to a recruiter on LinkedIn?
Four sentences: who you are, why them specifically, one answerable question, a graceful exit. No CV attached, no call request. Ask about the role or the team, not whether they have openings.
How long should a cold message be?
Under 80 words. Fifteen seconds to read, two minutes to answer. If it needs scrolling on a phone, cut it.
Is it okay to message a hiring manager directly?
Yes, if you ask something they can answer without checking with HR: what the role really involves, what they look for in a junior. Do not ask them to review your CV or to skip the process.
How many people should I message?
Five researched messages a week beat fifty templates. Expect roughly one in three to reply; alumni reply more often than strangers.
What if nobody replies?
Normal. Wait a week, send one short follow-up, then move on. The next message costs two minutes.